Trifextra: Week Seventy Seven ~ Above Us

Prompt ~ Ring, water, stage plus thirty more.

ring
water
stage
ring
water
stage

Up above our heads on the eternal stage,

the dervishes with none, one

and many a ring whirl.

Adamantly naive look

for a drop of water,

in river many thousand light years long.

words ~ 33

 

 

 

thirty-three word free-write.
thirty-three word free-write.
thirty-three word free-write.
thirty-three word free-write.
thirty-three word free-write.

This weekend we are asking you to play around with the following quote:

Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to be kind.
–Henry James

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Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to be kind.
–Henry James – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.Ke1cTTBZ.dpuf
Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to be kind.
–Henry James – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.Ke1cTTBZ.dpuf
Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to be kind.
–Henry James – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.Ke1cTTBZ.dpuf
Three things in human life are important. The first is to be kind. The second is to be kind. And the third is to be kind.
–Henry James – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/#sthash.Ke1cTTBZ.dpuf
describe summer in your own words.
describe summer in your own words.
describe summer in your own words.
describe summer in your own words.
describe summer in your own words.
describe summer in your own words.

 
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26 thoughts on “Trifextra: Week Seventy Seven ~ Above Us

    • Thanks for coming.

      This is a flight of ideas.

      In he sky above us the planets rotate on their axis and revolve around the sun (like derveshes ). Some have no rings (mercury, venus, mars), other have one (yet to be discovered) and some many (Jupiter 3, saturn & uranus 13, neptune 5).

      Space scientist keep looking for water on mars and other planet as an indicator to life on the planet in the long long milky way – a river of stars also referred as river of spirits in esoteric tradition.

      Hope it helps 🙂

  1. dervish is always a powerful word, taking us directly to the iconic image and the swirling/whirling/spinning.

    I thought perhaps your piece was referring to space but I was glad to read your insider ‘scoop’ in response to the first comment.

    Intriguing!

  2. This is a cool piece, but I think the symbolism/metaphors work against it. It reads more like a riddle (which is cool, honestly) than anything else, imho.

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