Prompt –
Finish the story begins with: “Racing down into the atmosphere, the unidentified object crashed, leaving behind one heck of a huge crater and a plume of smoke that could be seen from miles around.”
Racing down into the atmosphere, the unidentified object crashed, leaving behind one heck of a huge crater and a plume of smoke that could be seen from miles around.
The crowd watched in silence as the gigantic man and woman fought. They wrestled each other till the woman had the man’s neck in her strong hands. She tried twisting his neck to break it but the man writhed out of her grip and fearing-his-freedom she pushed him with all her might. He went sailing across the horizon.
The man looked dead; however, he recovered. He looked around and his bloodshot eyes rested on a huge boulder. He got up picked the boulder with a loud grunt. He closed his eyes as he struggled to remain erect and hurled it at her. As the boulder flew towards her his heart jumped out of his rib-cage and flew towards the crowd.
Initially I thought that his heart was going to land on my head and ducked as did many others in the IMAX theatre.
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Fun twist at the end! Those 3D films get me every time, however determined I am not to jump 🙂
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Loved the story! Thank you for participating! Stay tuned for next week? Hope so! Be well! ^..^
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Fabulous story it had the feel of the theatre, though I had in mind a good old B grade sci flick. Enjoyed the visuals you created.
The prompt some how provokes sci fi thoughts.
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I really liked the 3D spin at the end. It caught me off guard.
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I enjoyed the sci-fi take as well as the all-in wrestling for openers ~ Well written YS~ 🙂
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Good twist at the end, Yarnspinnerr. Creative take on the prompt. Well done as always. 🙂 — Suzanne
Glad you liked it. Thank you, Suzanne. 🙂