Prompt  ….


PHOTO PROMPT – © Ron Pruitt

Suzie caught the bus by the skin of her teeth. She sat down regained her breath and reviewed the last one hour.

She had wandered in to a decrepit building searching for a Malbari spice-store. She looked in ….. screamed and scampered back to the main road; a look over her shoulder revealed the men coming after her. She ran for her life and got on the bus.

Soon, she noticed a big black motorcycle following the bus. If you witness a murder in this city, do not scream loudly – just tiptoe away, she deduced.

Words < 100


Thanks for the prompt Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. SHALOM.


19 thoughts on “Flight

  1. That was a mini-thriller, Yarnspinnerr. If a person witnesses a murder, they’d be in trouble from two directions. They’ld need to try and get in a witness protection program. Well written. 🙂 — Suzanne

  2. How many murders has she, or will she see, in that town that she need to remember what to do post witnessing?
    And, doesn’t look like she’ll get any more practice time with that motorcyclists following.
    Hope her cell phone works to call ahead for police help.

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