Maharishi Valmiki* (aka – Agni Sharma, Ratnakar) is believed to be the first Sanskrit poet and author of Sanskrit Ramayana comprising 24000 shlokas. It is dated about 500 – 100 BC. I have fictionalized his early life for this prompt.
Prompt ….
Look at the ant-hill for some time and you may see a faint outline of the face of Agni Sharma. He was a reformed highway robber who infested these ancient woods once.
One day he attacked a sage passing through these woods and was impressed by the sage’s calm demeanor. On inquiry he told the sage that he robbed to feed his family. The sage asked him whether his family would apportion the karma of his sins. He sought the answer from his family and was stunned to know that none of them were ready to share it.
The sage advised him to chant the name of Rama as penance. However, the sinner could not pronounce Rama because of his misdeeds. The sage then asked him to chant ‘mara’ (~kill in hindi).
The robber sat in a meditative posture for years chanting mara, mara. The woods were infested with white-ants and they made an ant-hill (~Valmik in sanskrit) around the reformed robber.
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*Valmiki ~ Born of Valmik (anthill)
PS – Finally, the sage returned and removed the anthill; and also bestowed him with divinity and called him Valmiki as he was reborn from the ant-hill. Besides being the first Sanskrit poet and authoring the epic Ramayan he is also credited as the mentor and tutor of Lord Rama’s twin sons.
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Nice take, YS. This is a story not many know (I do :D) and that makes it very special.
True. Thank you so much.
Thank you for reviving this story which I had heard in the past. Excellent take!
So glad. Thank you.
Great story YS! This may be the revisiting of an old legend! Wonderful!
Glad you think so. Thank you.
A rather grisly end to be sure.
It is because I used his early life for the flash. I have added a PS that depicts the true legend.
Thank you so much.
Great legend, and a fitting take on the prompt.
Thank you IK. 🙂
Such a grim ending, a story which is great to read.
It is because I used his early life for the flash. I have added a PS that depicts the true legend.
Thank you so much.
Thanks for sharing the story. Though I knew about his history, I didn’t know the meaning of his name or about the ant hill at all. Such a relevant story, as though the pic was meant as an illustration of the great story . Wonderful, YS.
Yes, it fits well. Actually I shot this at Didhwa tiger resort in North India. It is a contiguous forest with Jim Corbet National park and you can find lots of similar ant-hills.
Thank you for the interest and encouragement.
Our sages were highly imaginative. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful.
Thanks for the read and encouragement.
I always learn something new here! Great story!
Thank you for a very generous comment. 🙂
This is the stuff that legends are made of. Excellent story and very well written, YS and thanks for the lovely photo too.
It is a story we all know. I just fictionalized it here.
Thanks for the read and the nice comment.
Interesting story and use of the prompt, Yarnspinnerr. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
Glad it interested you. Thank you.